I. Nietzsche with his Kierkegaard up (hans frygt og bæven)
Even
IF
good were
as plentiful as
pointed blades
in these fields
of dandelion
heroes,
I
will still have shot that gun faster than
god
reaching
for Abraham’s
hand,
instead
of blocking
the ham
’mer.
II. Zeno’s second amendment
Suddenly still
the hole spoke
smoke, but cut
through the silence
like garlic and spit
anyway, it split
the air
like an arrow
parsing the second
it hit,
nearer by half
but dead as it comes.
III. SpinoZa Chamber
There is not much
to this little room,
nothing substantial
to protect.
Not even the walls
are solid enough.
No love, but love
of love, no life
to understand,
understanding
there aren't
any axes to grind
just glass for new lenses.
We could be friends
until bullets fly,
punching their way
through the ceiling,
making larger
holes in the sky.
IV. Kant [we all (just) get along]
If your fear
is that this gun
is a categorical
/imperative
independent/ of
its action,
then know that
it’s not that guns
[kill people]
or that people kill
people, or even/\that people with
guns
[kill people] it's
the fact that [people]
kill other people at all
which proves that we can’t be trusted.
Whetstone: Just screwing around with ideas. I do take particular pleasure in posting this to the group - The Bullet Proof Poets Society.
















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I love that you are writing Calders again, and the form seems especially appropriate for the Existentialists, who insist that we must impose meaning on the absurd world into which we are born.
The Zeno poem is great (that guy understood calculus before it was invented). Would it be too much to wonder if that poem could be more "concrete"? (Probably impossible, but I kept thinking that each line would be 1/2 as long as the line before it).
The Spinoza poem may be my favorite due to its quiet imagism and your equation of the lenses he grinds to the dome of the sky.
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