Prompt: Write a sketch featuring a self-important character who uses fractured, jargony, wordy English, and capture that in the dialogue.
I am quite peaked, as I streak down the street, constrained by my wayward tacts involving criminals in my pity party. Chomping at the bit, I must acquaint my nerve with my pain. Incidentally, there is a connection between my regime, in the light of several different compatriots, I would venture to say that there is a similar vein in which I often give myself over to fits of restraint.
Simply put, my only resource is to gravitate toward that point in time where I was definitely absent from that class of grief. I would often think, it is said that grass grows out of replete rows, given free reign to implore for a right to adore.
In conclusion, the most complete confession only comes when a mind is naïve to the world’s narrow-minded faculties.
recommend
Facebook
Twitter
bookmark 
print
Comments: 24
You certainly hit the prompt, Angela.
Thanks John. ;)
I just recently finished reading a mystery book that I bought at a book signing at a local book store. The basic story line was pretty good but it was hard to mow down the unnecessary words to get to the meat of the story. Your story (for lack of a better word) reminded me of the book. LOL!
Ha, ha. I'm glad that I reminded you of that book you read.
That gives me hope for the future. Te he!

 Thanks for sharing with Hey, What Did You Say? at the Triple Name Club.
And, for accepting at TNC
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474981843651
Thanks for sharing with Surreal Circus