MY FIRST BUD OF SPRING SAT GWE

Love is a strange flower
It blooms in the sun of trust
as it thirsts for the rain of friendship

The most Fragrant bud of spring
Bloomed with a smile from your eyes
and the gentle touch of your hand
one
while walking in the rain one day

There was never a more beautiful beginning

than an never ending us
You brought sun dreams and moon songs

ever so softly into my lonely life
as our love ignited into a full blossom
and our hearts became ONE

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Alainia~ Tha one n only~ a. Jan 27, 2013, 3:21pm UTC

This is beautiful

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 3:24pm UTC

THANKS SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED AND COMMENTED

Alainia~ Tha one n only~ a. Jan 27, 2013, 3:27pm UTC

NP ~ I love poems <3

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 3:54pm UTC

GLAD I LOVE WRITING THEM

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David W. Jan 27, 2013, 3:28pm UTC

Nice to see you again Jules and a beautiful touch of poetry to accompanied your return.

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 3:53pm UTC

GLAD SOMEONE EVEN REMEMBERED ME IT HAS BEEN SO LONG BUT I AM BACK PROMISED MYSELF AT LEAST ONE POST A DAY TAKING SOME OF MY ONES AND REEDITING THEM WHILE THE IDEAS BUILD FOR MORE

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Joann B. Jan 27, 2013, 4:25pm UTC

lovely, gentle rythm

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 10:19pm UTC

THANKS GENTLE IS WHAT I FELT

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Betty S. Jan 27, 2013, 5:10pm UTC

such a beautiful poem!

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 10:20pm UTC

thanks betty

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Angela A. Jan 27, 2013, 5:30pm UTC

Wow, that was very pretty!

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Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 10:20pm UTC

glad you enjoyed it

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dee b. Jan 27, 2013, 6:55pm UTC

Good to see ya girl! I see you haven't lost your touch either. Well written, with a nice subtle flow.

Jules who is loving life again Jan 27, 2013, 10:18pm UTC

THANKS JUST GETTING BACK TO IT FEELING PRETTY GOOD THANKS

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Kevin E. Jan 31, 2013, 9:38pm UTC

This is a beautiful poem written by a poet who must know a great deal about love.

Jules who is loving life again Feb 10, 2013, 12:15am UTC

yes Kevin and there are many forms of love I am glad you enjoyed this I am back to writing mabe slow but at least 1 to 2 a week.

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Len Maxwell Feb 1, 2013, 9:32pm UTC

I can't believe any challenge of mine could bring out such beautiful writing and feelings. Nicely done.

Thanks for taking the SatWE challenge.

Len Maxwell Feb 2, 2013, 8:03pm UTC

Saturday gives me the chance to come back and feature your work on Gather Writing Essential.

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Jules who is loving life again Feb 2, 2013, 8:46pm UTC

OH I AM THRILLED I just started writing again after a few years of not writing much and to be recognized in this fashion is keeping myself to my promise to myself Bless you!!!!!!

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