by Vj McMullan
Member since:
September 18, 2011

Your Turn! (Sat WE) The Grass is Greener

September 08, 2012 08:28 PM UTC
views: 0 | 5 people recommend this | comments: 14

In many of Sal's past lives he was green with envy

In fact, he often worked himself into a frenzy

Sal discovered last is least

When green giant devoured his feast

Prior demise, Sal blurted-wait! at least I was wealthy.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comments: 14

Pam Brittain Sep 8, 2012, 8:31pm UTC
I really like this one.
William M. Sep 8, 2012, 8:51pm UTC
Very good.
☃ Shannon K. Wendt Sep 8, 2012, 9:03pm UTC
Catchy!
Debbie W. Sep 8, 2012, 9:15pm UTC
Very good! Poor Sal!
Pamela Marks Sep 8, 2012, 9:27pm UTC
I like this one " last is least" is my favorite with "devoured the feast"
Len Maxwell Sep 8, 2012, 11:28pm UTC
A unique approach I doubt anyone else will consider. Nicely done.

Thanks for taking the SatWE challenge and I'm pleased to feature it on Gather Writing Essential.
Vj McMullan Sep 9, 2012, 1:56am UTC
I was somewhat reluctant in writing a limerick; when trying the challenge (various other versions) it just came in my mind in that particular way. Thank you
Irina Dimitric Sep 9, 2012, 3:43am UTC
nice limerick
Vj McMullan Sep 9, 2012, 8:45am UTC
Thank you
JOHN BECK Sep 9, 2012, 7:14am UTC
Perspective is everything Good one.
Vj McMullan Sep 9, 2012, 8:50am UTC
Reminds of having cognitive session.
Ms Lee P. Sep 9, 2012, 11:00pm UTC
LOL, love it. It's so cute. Nicely written.
"2016 " Sep 9, 2012, 11:04pm UTC
our loving thoughts an prayers, Sal ♥
connie h. Sep 15, 2012, 9:58pm UTC
nice

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