Blind Love, A Rondelet For Mindful Poetry

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JOHN BECK Aug 3, 2012, 9:11pm UTC

Well done, and the image works well.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:26am UTC

Thanks, John. I appreciate your comment.

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Heaven M. Aug 3, 2012, 9:20pm UTC

<3 perfect day for me to read this! BEAUTIFUL! Thank you :]

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:26am UTC

Hello, who are you?

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:24pm UTC

Heaven, what a great name! Welcome to Gather.

Heaven M. Aug 6, 2012, 8:23pm UTC

Thank you :] I enjoyed this very much!

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May Xue Aug 3, 2012, 10:10pm UTC

Well done!

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:27am UTC

Thank you. May!

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Veronica Hosking Aug 3, 2012, 10:15pm UTC

Love it!

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:28am UTC

From you, a blessing.

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Mustafa Demiri Aug 3, 2012, 11:17pm UTC

absolutely mesmerizing... I loved it.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:29am UTC

OMG...i'm in heaven.

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Benita K. Aug 3, 2012, 11:18pm UTC

Pretty darn good.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:30am UTC

whoo who from you...

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Len Maxwell Aug 3, 2012, 11:38pm UTC

Very nice. That picture fits it perfectly.

Thanks for sharing with The Triple Name Club.

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Diane Huizenga Aug 3, 2012, 11:58pm UTC

Yes indeed, wonderful

Thanks for sharing with Surreal Circus

Richard Lynn Livesay Aug 4, 2012, 5:25pm UTC

we'll leave the lights on

Featured on Surreal Circus

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 5:58pm UTC

Thanks for the feature, Richard.

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Janet "Jax" B. Aug 4, 2012, 12:08am UTC

Well done...I like it.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 5:58pm UTC

Thanks, Janet!

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Stirling D. Aug 4, 2012, 12:41am UTC

Fascinating.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 1:41am UTC

hey you. i wish we could meet again. You are a muse.

Stirling D. Aug 4, 2012, 12:23pm UTC

I feel the same way! My plans for CA did not work out for this year. Hopefully next ... if you are up my way, let me know - I will make you a salad and homemade lemonade so we can cool off in this heat.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:25pm UTC

We were your way...but only briefly - a six day turn around to Florida, New Jersey and only one day in Manhattan. I'm going to do a photo essay on the day trip.

Stirling D. Aug 4, 2012, 11:32pm UTC

You jetsetter, you. We'll catch up one of these days.

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Betty S. Aug 4, 2012, 1:46am UTC

Very Neatly done/.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:29pm UTC

Thanks. It was a fun exercise, Betty.

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Kathryn Flynn Aug 4, 2012, 3:14am UTC

wonderful!!

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:30pm UTC

Thanks, K.

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elizabeth evans Aug 4, 2012, 6:23am UTC

One should watch where one swims....plenty of sharks out there!

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:30pm UTC

But hopefully, not in your pond.

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A. F. Stewart Aug 4, 2012, 8:10am UTC

A poem that weaves a captivating spell.

Granny Janny Aug 4, 2012, 3:31pm UTC

Your rondelet is so fine.

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J. Reid Aug 4, 2012, 8:31am UTC

Smiles...

Thank you for submitting to: Shadows & Spaces...

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JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Aug 4, 2012, 9:56am UTC

Yummy, Ms. Jan.

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Pam Brittain Aug 4, 2012, 1:09pm UTC

Great one. I love it.

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Ann Marcaida Aug 4, 2012, 3:45pm UTC

Sounds like advice to the younger generation! Thanks for sharing with Gather's Luminous Writers and Artists.

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Ms Lee P. Aug 4, 2012, 4:10pm UTC

Awww, the hypnotic bug zapper! Nice write. You are a cautious romantic.

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Magi the magical poet is flowing with the wind Aug 4, 2012, 9:24pm UTC

Lily Marlene.

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Alison H. Aug 4, 2012, 11:40pm UTC

Hypnotizing, indeed!

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Chris Brockman Aug 5, 2012, 12:37pm UTC

The eyes have it, and the ayes have it. Good work.

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Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Aug 6, 2012, 4:02pm UTC

Mmmm. I'd like to double feature this one. Very excellent, Jan.

A fine rondelet at Mindful Poetry's feature page!

Granny Janny Aug 21, 2012, 3:13am UTC

Thanks for the read and feature, although I do not see it there. It's a fun form.

Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Aug 21, 2012, 11:53pm UTC

I'll check again. Just returned tonight from a ten-day trip and what a back-log!

Granny Janny Aug 22, 2012, 3:26pm UTC

No big deal, my friend. I'm just glad that you liked it. I highly respect your opinions.

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Caroline Adele O'Brien Aug 11, 2012, 12:42am UTC

I love it, Jan! Your words, themselves are hypnotizing :). The picture is a perfect companion. It adds a spooky quality that makes me want to read it all over again.