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Anonymous narrator, single character, for Sunday Writing Essentials

June 27, 2012 01:43 PM UTC

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Slumped in a corner, he watched the victim die. Who was this man? The murderer rose, gazed dark-eyed back at him. Then two became one.

Narrator is not part of the story.

Narrator knows what the protagonist is thinking.

Narrator doesn't know what the guy gazing back is thinking.

Well... except that two become one I suppose. Still the prompt inspired the words.

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JOHN BECK Jun 27, 2012, 2:03pm UTC

I can read the last line several ways. Well done, Sheila.

Pam Brittain Jun 27, 2012, 2:24pm UTC

This is wonderful. I can read it different ways, like John said, but all of them are fascinating.

Doug Westberg Jun 27, 2012, 7:45pm UTC

Thanks for playing SunWinks!

Angela A. Jun 27, 2012, 9:50pm UTC

I thought you did a great job!

Patricia J. Jun 28, 2012, 8:43pm UTC

This is excellent, Sheila!!


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