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 There seems to be no end to the flow of form poetry. This month's form has a very classic, formal feel to it, perfect in light of all the commencement ceremonies and nuptials to be shared.
Last month's double-dactyls started out strong with several submitted. I have not even read them all yet. Seems like May was a shorter month than February! Please be patient if I haven't commented on your form-of-the-month for May poem. But don't hesitate to ask for a comment. Help me keep my word to read and leave a remark on every FOTM submission.
Here is a ballade I wrote this morning to help you learn about June's form-of-the-month. Â
I found the form in my Patterns of Poetry, an encyclopedia of forms by Miller Williams. It also describes a ballade with double refrain. Take a look at my teaching poem and after the poem, I will lay out the details in another format.
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A Teaching Ballade
The ballade for Mindful Poetry
Appears to be our form for June
As you write and tap each key
The rhyming scheme will shape a tune
A regular meter’s not picayune
Keep the time the guidelines state
Your success induces me to swoon
May your ballade illuminate!
Three stanzas and an envoy, see?
If you write less, you’ll end too soon
Pattern your rhymes of A, B, and C
Line eight repeats like a blue moon
In this French form that surfs the dune
Use rhymezone to navigate
Above reproach, you’ll be immune
May your ballade illuminate!
Sometimes I’m slow, but guarantee
To your ballade, I’ll be attune
I’ll leave a note, some repartee
To be sure, I’ll not impugn
A few more points I must harpoon
So keep your course, do not conflate
Repeated rhymes a big boo-boo!
May your ballade illuminate!
The envoy works like a cocoon
Written in four lines instead of eight
To draw attention like a loon
May your ballade illuminate!
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Ballade
- 28 lines total
- three stanzas of 8 lines plus envoy of 4 lines
(three octaves and a quatrain) - the last line of all four stanzas is a refrain
- lines of any (but equal) length
(use a syllabic count) - no rhyme word is repeated
- rhyme scheme is as follows:
a-b-a-b-b-c-b-CÂ --stanzas 1-3
b-c-b-CÂ Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â --envoy
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Comments: 47
"The ballade was one of the principal forms of music and poetry in fourteenth- and fifteenth-century France. Not to be confused with the ballad, the ballade contains three main stanzas, each with the same rhyme scheme, plus a shorter concluding stanza, or envoi. All four stanzas have identical final refrain lines. The tone of the ballade was often solemn and formal, with elaborate symbolism and classical references."
To be honest, I wrote my teaching ballade three-fourths of the way with the wrong scheme! Fixing it wasn't as onerous as I feared, though.
It's more do-able than you might think. Mostly, it's managing the rhyme scheme.
C'mon, don't break my heart, Jax.
It's a chore to explain, but easier to write than you'd think.
Of course, I'm very pleased with everyone's participation, but I don't want to guilt folks into writing.
So here's a big :-) for you, Jax, with whatever you decide.
Thanks for sharing and submitting to
The Surreal Circus.
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This form uses symbolism, which ties in with Doug Westerberg's Writing Essential prompt from last Sunday.
when you say no word may be repeated, am I correct in thinking that is repeated as a rhyme word? meaning, the word could recur elsewhere in the poem? or not. thanks.
However I feel strongly that it means no rhyme word is used again as a rhyme word. That would make the most sense to me.
It also reminds us of the importance of selecting a word with many rhymes. When I write a villanelle, I sometimes choose a word with only a handful of rhymes and use it for the middle-line rhyme. One only needs about five rhymes in that position. The same is not true for a ballade.
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Once again, thanks for your tireless efforts and immensely rewarding posts, SusieCoozy!
:)
a French Ballade to boot has come down the shoot
and my mind is a swimm'n like a turkey with trimm'n
thanks Susan for a super challenge...I'll try to get in form
yippee-kay-yea
That explains these danged chin hairs.
lol
Monsieur Robert, ladies do not shave--shudder--we pluck!
I had better get on the ball myself and tackle the form for my own ballade!
Do you think sleeping might be squeezed in there, too?
I will try to catch up with Everyone, later this evening.