“O, for a draught of vintage! That hath been
Cooled a long age in the deep-delved earth,
Tasting of Flora and the country green,
Dance, and Provencal song, and sunburnt mirth!
O for a beaker full of the warm South,
Full of the true, the blushful Hippocrene*,
With beaded bubbles winking at the brim,
And purple-stained mouth;
That I might drink, and leave the world unseen,
And with thee fade away into the forest dim”:…John Keats
,*Hippocrene:
( a spring on Mount Helicon sacred to the Muses and regarded as a source of poetic inspiration)
Cobweb Whispers
Trickling shadows on fallen leaves
Leaves that gave their lives for Spring
Spring unconsciously in the breeze
Breeze blows clouds into my sleep
My mind tumbles like a landslide
Breaking into flames of rivers deep
Deep within the human psyche dwells
A resonance, calling us to come home
To the primeval forest to rest our souls
Souls like lost streams in eternal time
Torn apart from their source to meander
Like the wandering thoughts of our minds
Minds that think they are and become self-aware
I am, I think and the definition becomes subjective
But the three-way attachment is lost somewhere
Somewhere between the mind-body-spirit is balance
A neutral spark of truth that is pure being and knowing
And at night the forest sleeps, dreaming in still silence


















Comments: 37
Thanks for posting to the Wall of Balance on The Triple Name Club where it's now featured.
A resonance, calling us to come home
To the primeval forest to rest our souls
The words just flow out of you my friend-- Lovely, write!
Thank you submitting to Gathers Luminous Writers and Artists. Now Featured.
You build me up with your comments...I am blessed
blessings
appreciate the tweet...have noticed many more comments lately, thanks
My Own Attempt at this Form, Thanks Ruchard
:+)
Your verse seems like you a blending in a mixing bowl ingredients of surreal moments.
A resonance, calling us to come home
To the primeval forest to rest our souls"
Richard, the above is pure truth in poetry...gorgeous.
And I love the Keats poem, too.