Space Is Fundamental (Concrete Poetry- 4/19/12)

space

IS BOUNDLESS

and the concept of space is fundamental

T/
o

    r...stand...
   e.............   .i
     d...................   n
   un........................        g

the physical universe

<Yet, debate exists beTween philosophers>

But romantics know

while stars reflect hope

and love there will be

no end to reckoning

galaxies spun

Comments: 10

Robert - just a simple man - B. Apr 19, 2012, 8:58pm UTC

Very Good.

Please come see mine:

Two 70s Spacemen in Concrete Form

:+)

Virginia M. Apr 19, 2012, 9:05pm UTC

Thank you, Robert.

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JOHN BECK Apr 19, 2012, 9:38pm UTC

Excellent, Virginia.

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Kevin E. Apr 19, 2012, 10:23pm UTC

So much fun to read, kind of like a game for reading! Very well done indeed!

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Irina Dimitric Apr 19, 2012, 10:27pm UTC

Very intricate. I'm learning a lot about concrete poetry. Excellent, Virginia.

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Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Apr 20, 2012, 12:05am UTC

Darn it all! You gave me a surprise here! What a funky concrete poem, Virginia. :-) I understand the words well, but not as positive about the diagram, but interpretation is what poetry is all about.

Impressive and now appearing at Mindful Poetry.

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Janet "Jax" B. Apr 20, 2012, 1:03am UTC

That's very neat Virginia.

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A. F. Stewart Apr 20, 2012, 8:24am UTC

Beautifully creative and clever.

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Angie O. Apr 20, 2012, 10:47am UTC

Very creative and unique. Loved what you did with the name understanding.

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Alison H. Apr 20, 2012, 4:43pm UTC

Well-penned and designed, delightful and thought-provoking.

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Space Is Fundamental (Concrete Poetry- 4/19/12)

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