WALLS AND BARRIERS

the walls you build are made of arrogant-steel bricks

that stick

by means of the bad-tempered thoughts,

by means of your own attitudes marked by the wrong-

they are all built by your own Ego King-Kong,

not for the people of Hong-Kong

by for your neighbor and your friend

and, seems, they really do not have any end,

the barriers made of the wrong looks,

of judgements, poor and underestimated

that, later,

will be animated

in your own actions, procrostinated,

half-arrogant and half-elated-

and with all that you try to meet the God-

you'll have to work on your site just a lot!

Ivan Petryshyn

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Pam Brittain Mar 19, 2012, 5:56pm UTC

Ivan, this is very good. I especially like 'they are all built by your own Ego King-Kong'.

Ivan P. Mar 21, 2012, 12:06pm UTC

Thank you so much: we all know it's not our fault, but the King-Kongs of other very often poison our lives and do not give us a chance to pursue our happiness- for what, the Ego-King-Kongs should be punished!

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Sheila Deeth Mar 27, 2012, 2:27pm UTC

I liked that line too.

Ivan P. Mar 28, 2012, 12:01pm UTC

Thank you, too.

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Ms Lee P. Mar 27, 2012, 2:50pm UTC

I DO have a King Kong ego. How did you know? But that being said, I refuse to run for congress .... LOL .... now there is a place where you will find a lot of King Kong egos all trying to be the biggest King Kong .... LOL. But some of them actually think about us once in a while.

Ms Lee P. Mar 27, 2012, 2:52pm UTC

Oh my gosh. I was so busy showing off that I forgot to say how much I enjoyed your revelations. Nice writing Ivan.

Ivan P. Mar 28, 2012, 12:02pm UTC

THank you. Now, tell me , please, how I can earn with all the revelations of the Century?

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