Where shall we find experimental purposes
Trending to the pendulum pace of present age
Shifting priorities and a cultural change
Seemingly in sync with global revolutions
Without a clue what to do, or really truth
Haze and maze imbibes informational melting
Each day goes through changes in its meaning
Why and glorious courage to know
Policy of a broken bow
Trust that relies now confused
Representative blues
Phony bologna
Not Patriot
Selfish lout
Evil
Smells
Why are the thirsty willing well educated
Being denied, being denied, being denied
Knowing our leaders have given away the store
And what’s explored; most reading this know the answer
Accountability, accountability
Leaders are known by their produce as their legend
And gracious skies reflecting selfish ambitions
Few graciously given and the many just lapse
Democracy in a free fall of certain collapse
My country tis of thee, sweet land of misery
Disgracefully bleeds
Not the land our Founding Father’s implied
Special interests throwing citizens aside
And hope is lost in political fights
So will our children weep?


















Comments: 38
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Thanks for sharing with Surreal Circus
Thank you and you.
Your final stanza with the parody of "My Country 'Tis of Thee" and your line "Special interests throwing citizens aside" really makes an impact.
Well written and thought provoking...
Thank you for responding to the WWE prompt.
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We have lost a lot since 9-11 in the name of security............
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I certainly agree with you. I'm a Libertarian. Our government is not for the people anymore and that's sad. The cost of fear is loss of freedom.
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Mare~
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I remember when young helping anyone older than me on power plant jobs that require great strength. Let me carry that 10 foot stick of rigid conduit I would say, My parents taught me to respect my elders...now, I am old watching others go about there work without a thought. Weeping ...maybe if they do not get what they want for being spoiled.
A country that allows the senate and congress to vote for there own golden parachute retirement plan...we need someone to run this country like a business...like TRUMP.
All this aside...I am not even close to being smart as you william. This was written well, thoughts that provoke thoughts compounded by thought. The only thing is I try to change what I can with this I am hopeless except for a lone vote that is only eletorial.
I replied on my post "Wrong" because I thought there were a better way of writing my poem with hope of some help. I do thank you and all of Gatherland for the help recieved since being here....please excuse my typos because I am in a dark room.
To me, writing is the type of conversation I wish my audience to hear. Look inside for that known and reinvent your experience.
Sorry, but I very very very rarely go beyond comments.
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evil smells is my favorite line it reminds me of how evil does smell
IMnsHO and E.