by Sheila Deeth
Member since:
February 1, 2007

Blood Moon - Tuesday Writing Essentials

October 11, 2011 04:18 PM UTC (Updated: October 11, 2011 04:30 PM UTC)
views: 0 | 9 people recommend this | comments: 12

 

“Moon’s out tonight,” said Joe.

“Great. We’re good to go.”

Tess pulled the black hood over her head.

Joe, blood-moon-lit, bit till she was dead.

Comments: 12

Richard Lynn Livesay Oct 11, 2011, 5:40pm UTC
very clever vampire and poem


thanks for sharing with Surreal Circus
Angela A. Oct 11, 2011, 5:44pm UTC
Well, that was cool!
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A. F. Stewart Oct 11, 2011, 6:53pm UTC
A wonderful piece.
william d. Oct 12, 2011, 12:03am UTC
I loved it
JOHN BECK Oct 12, 2011, 12:30am UTC
Tess offered blood to him freely
A gesture all touchy and feely
She pulled on the hood
As he knew she would
So he could enjoy his blood mealie.
Sheila Deeth Oct 12, 2011, 1:02am UTC
Ah, very nice John!
William Dotani Oct 12, 2011, 1:06am UTC
LOL.
Catalina P. Oct 12, 2011, 12:34am UTC
Vampire v.s Hoodie ( now that's surreal ) Great poem Sheila : D
William Dotani Oct 12, 2011, 1:06am UTC
A nice dining experience, eh.
Patricia J. Oct 12, 2011, 2:25am UTC
Short and sweet, I like your no nonsense attitude!
Elsie Duggan Oct 18, 2011, 12:19am UTC
I loved this concise short poem Sheila, certainly gets it's point across,thank you for sharing it with TWE, where it is now featured, love, Elsie
Len Maxwell Oct 20, 2011, 8:06pm UTC
Whoa! That was a surprise. Well done.

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