She found the advertisement on Craig’s List. It sounded perfect; bedrooms, 2 bathrooms. Keeping her dog was not going to be a problem. She could keep all of her own appliances, too.
The place had a pool; which would be perfect for lounging. The patio butted right up to the kitchen. WOW!, she thought, it couldn’t be more perfect!
My patio furniture is going to look great out here, she thought; and the curtains I have will coordinate in the living room, too!
She met with the apartment manager, established the lease agreement, the terms, without hesitation, she nearly shouted when she beamed a big smile as said, “I’ll takeit”.
So, Len, how did I do?
Ant Boni
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Comments: 11
Hugs,
Mare~
Thanks, Connie. When it comes to serious writing, I'm just a novice.
You're a lot better than you think you are. Confidence!!!!! I'm serious.
After our conversation, I'd really like to see you rewrite this. I don't say that just to make work for you, but because I think you could do a great job of it.
Thank you for taking the SatWE challenge.