Yep, I goofed up. I had a really neat plan for this week, but it turned out to be more complicated and convoluted than I had thought. So…
So, I’m going to switch the scheduled fourth and fifth weeks’ challenges. Wow, you didn’t see that one coming, did you? This week will be freestyle and next week will be the hard challenge.
Well, freestyle as much as I ever allow you. Let’s see, I have ten minutes to come up with something that will allow you to do whatever you want and still restrict you in some way. I know. Some years ago, I challenged a writing group to describe a picture. I can’t use that one here because it was a body-painted bride.
Everyone said she was wearing lingerie and stockings. Wrong -- she was totally nude and everything they saw, except for veil and shoes, was paint. With that in mind, here’s a picture for you to describe.
The important thing is not to take anything for granted. Yes, there’s a clown, but it might not be a circus. Yes, it appears that there are trees in the background, but it could be a painting.
This Week’s Challenge:
Write five (5) FACTS about the picture. Don’t guess, don’t try to figure out what is going on, just write facts. Although I don’t normally critique any writing, I will respond to posts with yes or no indicating whether you actually wrote a fact or missed some important point.
Ideas:
No ideas this week, you just have to trust your eyes and not your brain.
I always write a response to my own challenges, but it wouldn’t be fair this week. Next Saturday, I’ll post my SatWE column and, within a few minutes, I’ll put up a post explaining what this picture represents.
Watch Out For:
Don’t guess about anything! Unless you were there, you won’t be able to explain what was happening that day. (Oops, I didn’t mean day, it might have been night with some kind of lighting. Don’t ASSUME anything -- it could be a movie set.)
Recap:
Lynn P. put up a challenge that would try the abilities of every writer. You responded with some of the best children’s stories I’ve seen in years.
At Granny's Knee - SatWE - Saturday Writing Essentials - Gather Writing Essentials by Elsie Duggan
Hissy - the Lonely Snake - Saturday Writing Challenge by Brenda Youngerman
Oscar and Timmy, a childrens story for Saturday Writing Essentials by Sheila Deeth
Rodney's Finger Painted Pet : SATWE : (Create a story for children between two and six years old) by William Dotani
Rodney's Finger Painted Pet : SATWE : (Create a story for children between two and six years old) by William Dotani
Saturday Writing Essential: Not Your Ordinary Rubber Ducky by A. F. Stewart
Saturday Writing Essential: The Knight and the Dragon by A. F. Stewart
SatWE ~ The Amazing DogBag! By Allen H.
The Easter Egg Hunt - (Saturday Writing Essential) by Lynn P.
The Lighthouse (Saturday Writing Essential) by Len Maxwell
Submissions to Previous Challenges:
Castles (Saturday Writing Essential) - IV - end by Inmate 702
Castle In My Back Yard - SATwe, Saturday Writing Essentials , Gather Writing Essentials by Elsie Duggan
As always, I’ll ask you to view each of the above because these writers worked hard to entertain you. Also, please remember to click on the “recommend” button for each of them. Thank you.
The Rules:
- Put this challenge statement at the beginning or end of your submission so readers will know what you’re supposed to do.
Challenge: Write five (5) FACTS about the picture. Don’t guess, don’t try to figure out what is going on, just write facts. Although I don’t normally critique any writing, I will respond to posts with yes or no indicating whether you actually wrote a fact or missed some important point.
- There is a limit of three submissions from each member per day. If you’re extremely prolific, spread out your work and post only three submissions per day.
- Post to Gather Writing Essential.
- Tag your submission with SatWE.
- Include (Saturday Writing Essential) as part of your title.
- I ask that you make your submission(s) by next Friday afternoon.
Good Writing!















Comments: 49
Are you in the picture?
Check out a close up of the guy leaning back in a lounge chair with the dog on his lap. Now, check out the guy on the right with the yellow baseball cap. This is not a fact...but darn if it's not an educated guess. ;)
Quite an interesting prompt. My late Great Dad did volunteer work at Children's hospital as 'Buddy The Clown.' He was a tool and dye journeyman for 36 years at GM. He took classes to become a clown. My dad was a very good and kind man.
You might be interested in the actual description of this picture next Saturday.
I'm sure Lord Shiva is at your side.
Does covering his ears so tightly hurt the poor, misunderstood Bunny?
Well, I just hope your bunny left heaps of chocolate eggs for you to find, Len!
Thanks for submitting to
The Surreal Circus.
Sorry, I am just having one of my Greg moment.
Great prompt.
Thank you for sharing with: Not Gathering Dust!
You do know this is Easter weekend...right?
5 facts? What if we are already drunk and seeing double - can we write 10?
Yes, I know it's Easter weekend and every editor in the world is prompting for Easter stories. Not my style.
Finally, I'm seeing two screens right now so I'm guessing you're going to write twenty facts, right?
Thank you posting to the Triple Name Club.
There are 5 men in the picture, assuming the Clown is male.
3 of the mean are wearing Baseball caps and two of them also have beards.
The only man wearing neither Hat nor Clown suit is trying to make up for it by carrying an antique shoulder-mounted video camera.
There are 5 women in the shot including the little girl and the lady with a camera in the background.
The ground is flat enough to be a floor, or a stage, and the Forest could be a back-drop behind a stage.
Now for some guesses: Frankly none of the people in the shot look like they could afford a prop back-drop of this photographic quality, so I think this is an outdoor performance, of a play for children would be my guess. From the background and the people's dress and hair, I'm going to guess at Southern California but well out of the city. How am I doing?
#2: Half right. You can't see the face of the man holding the camcorder; he might have a beard.
#3: False. Depending on your reference, antiques are more than 75 or 100 years old.
#4: Probable, but I commented on another post that the tall blonde in the foreground could be a man.
#5: True.
For your guesses: Outdoor - yes. SoCal - yes. Well out of the city - yes.
#2 - I used Ctrl+ to zoom in - I can see his chin and he hasn't.
#3 - I will substitute obsolete for antique, but it may have been current in 1983.
#4 - the tall blond is definitely not a man - shame on you for suggesting she could be. There are sufficient indications in the photo to make a positive gender ID, even from the back.
#5 - But I guessed it was not.
This was more fun than I thought it would be - thanks.
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