by Terry Collett
Member since:
November 1, 2006

WHAT BABY SAW.

December 23, 2010 09:47 AM UTC
views: 0 | 5 people recommend this | comments: 26

Brownlow didn’t like
The dresses or skirts

His wife wore, they were
Too short, revealed too

Much ass, leg, thigh and
Panties if bending

Low and the shades and
Colours were all wrong,

They didn’t match the
Colour of eyes or

Hair, but he wore them
Anyway, walking

Along the narrow
Catwalk of his bed

Room, gazing backward,
Into the mirror

And witnessed by one
Other than himself,

Sitting in his cot,
His seven-month son.

Comments: 26

Bernard C. Dec 23, 2010, 9:57am UTC
Quite the descriptive reality check there - thanks for sharing :-)

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Terry Collett Dec 23, 2010, 10:02am UTC
Thank you, Bernard.
Ann Marcaida Dec 23, 2010, 10:14am UTC
Sounds like Brownlow needs to invigorate his marriage! Thanks for sharing with Gather's Best Writers and Artists.
Terry Collett Dec 23, 2010, 10:17am UTC
Yes, indeedy. Thank you, Ann.
Nina A Dec 23, 2010, 11:04am UTC
Rather interesting. Photobucket
Terry Collett Dec 23, 2010, 11:17am UTC
Thank you, Nina.
Angela A. Dec 23, 2010, 1:04pm UTC
Some always bemoan clothing, because they want total control.

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Terry Collett Dec 23, 2010, 1:49pm UTC
Thank you, Angela.
Risa G. Dec 23, 2010, 3:18pm UTC
What an interesting way this went. I was expecting something different.
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:10am UTC
Thank you, Risa.
Darin Waugh Dec 23, 2010, 3:23pm UTC
Nice!
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:10am UTC
Thank you, Darin.
Cheryl W. Dec 23, 2010, 3:51pm UTC
Great writing here, Terry...:)
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:11am UTC
Thank you, Cheryl.
Brenda Youngerman Dec 23, 2010, 4:23pm UTC
Not what I thought the end would be!
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:11am UTC
Thank you, Brenda.
Sandy Moore Dec 23, 2010, 4:27pm UTC
Very interesting
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:11am UTC
Thank you, Sandy.
Kasey Klein Dec 23, 2010, 5:49pm UTC
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Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:11am UTC
Thank you, kasey.
Corina C. Dec 23, 2010, 9:33pm UTC
Maybe Brownlow should take his wife shopping! ;)

Nice piece of writing, Terry.
Terry Collett Dec 24, 2010, 8:12am UTC
Yeah get her to buy skirts and dresses he likes, lol. Thank you, Corina.
Peter Rogerson Dec 24, 2010, 8:50am UTC
I love the excellence of your twist in this, Terry.
Terry Collett Dec 25, 2010, 2:36pm UTC
I do my best, Peter.. Thank you.
zale orcid Dec 27, 2010, 12:06pm UTC
yes! mwah
Terry Collett Dec 27, 2010, 1:28pm UTC
Thank you, zale.

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