by Bill's Spirit
Member since:
March 3, 2006

Yet Another Revealed - Genre Shorties Week 18

December 14, 2009 12:35 PM UTC (Updated: December 16, 2009 02:13 PM UTC)
views: 0 | 1 person recommends this | comments: 32


I wandered a dark paneled hallway deep within the mansion. Surreal art works were framed and spaced evenly along the walls. A glorious female voice sang heart thrilling music from some undisclosed location. Curious, I pulled a stethoscope from my lab coat and worked it meticulously over walls, floor and ceiling.


The lifting refrains came seemingly from behind Dali’s “Metamorphosis of Narcissus.” Judiciously, I ran my fingers around the frame and brushed a hidden catch. A click sounded, a secret door opened, and my wandering eyes boggled at Susan Boyle delightfully throating  enraptured passions while Tiger wielded his eight wood.



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This short work of fiction crafted for the Genre Shorties Group prompt: “Show what is behind the secret door." - 100 words

Comments: 32

Donna Spirit Dec 14, 2009, 12:42pm UTC
Not Susan too, man, that Tiger is certainly not terribly picky, is he?
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:20pm UTC
I don't know about picky.... Susan is a superstar.
Kay M Dec 14, 2009, 2:06pm UTC
I love the painting and Susan Boyle's voice so I would find this door to be a delightful surprise.
As for Tiger ..........LOL......... No comment.
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:20pm UTC
Thanks, Kay.
Sharon P. Dec 14, 2009, 3:21pm UTC
Are you sure it wasn't Joan Rivers with a tape recording of Susan?
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:21pm UTC
Mwahahahahaha..... Good one, Sharon.
Sharon P. Dec 16, 2009, 11:55am UTC
;)
Liz H. Dec 14, 2009, 3:28pm UTC
So this is a "Horror Shortie?"

(Chuckles...)
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:18pm UTC
LOL - For some... Yes.
Adrian Eve Revenaugh Dec 14, 2009, 3:42pm UTC
Bill,
I enjoyed your voyeur/voyage.

(and Bill, congrats on your win at The Surreal Circus!)
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:18pm UTC
Thanks, Adrian.
Angela A. Dec 14, 2009, 11:11pm UTC
Oh man, that was priceless!! Great!
Would you post this to my group, Anythingwriting ? It would be an honor.
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:19pm UTC
Sure, Angela. I'd be glad to.

...and I'm glad you liked it.
Angela A. Dec 17, 2009, 9:48pm UTC
Well, thanks!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Dorothy H. Dec 15, 2009, 8:27am UTC
Nicely done!
Bill's Spirit Dec 15, 2009, 4:22pm UTC
Thanks, Dorothy.
Beth G. Dec 15, 2009, 9:50pm UTC
This was very nice!
Bill's Spirit Dec 16, 2009, 2:12pm UTC
Thanks, Beth.
Chas Andrews Dec 16, 2009, 3:29pm UTC
wrong dude. wrong.
Bill's Spirit Jan 5, 2010, 1:14pm UTC
Hee-hee-hee !!

Thanks for the comment, Chas.
A. F. Stewart Jan 4, 2010, 2:49pm UTC
I laughed out loud when I read the last line.
Bill's Spirit Jan 5, 2010, 1:15pm UTC
Now that is a great compliment.

Thanks, A.F.

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