Dissolved~ Thursday Writing Essential

Sensitive tribute to two prominent entertainers.

My Dear friend

Your words are an inspiratin to write often.Love

Wow!!! This is like making a sculpture out of words with each hit of the chisel (line) making the imagery of your thoughts unfold. This is excellent. 

When William says it means this is good.I am so honored,Love

Truth is not a stranger.

Isn't it amazing how my poet has painted, through few decievingly simple words, the parameters of a general life?

Bhawana, tussi great ho.

The sense of humor is also appreciated.

signature of life

aise tareef karogay to daily bardasht karni padegi...he he he...Thank you for your lovely words,Poddar.

Nehiiii... just joking. I want more poems from you.

Amazing description of their lives Bhawana!!  It WAS such breathtaking hope for one and such a shock on the other!!!!  It just keeps to keep going on and on with no end in sight...another just today!!!

Dear Deb,

I know this is the thing we can't control on.Love you,gal!

I'm late for work but I had to stop and leave you a comment because your poem hooked me from the first line.  Taut and spinning.  I love this.

Dear Striling! I missed you,really but soon come to your colorful world.Thanks .

Sensitive and powerful poem, Buzzy!

wonderful work. so much in so little. powerful piece.

This was a great tribute

Excellent - very moving.

Beautifully composed, Bhawana!

fixed and corrected it,my noble friend...thanks with a tight hug;)

I love it friend! So very short and to the point.

Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting

Succinct and powerful. Excellent write.

much thanks,Kay.

nice thanks for sharing..

Succinct, to the point, imaginative and a graphic metaphor. What more can the world ask for.

hope you're doing good,David.was worried about you.

Not to worry. I am taking the weekend to spend time with my bride and will probably not return unti Tuesday. Enjoy the Holiday.

wonderful Bhawana, love to see poetry from you,

You are as talented with words as you are with painting and photography. Very moving, there, girl.

Iam tempted to thank u for ur praise  for Bhawana but please  be more critical so that  her head does not get swollen with pride,write on my post please.

Dear Kathryn, I remember those days when I held your fingers on Gather and you constantly supported me on my each journey.You never left me alone.Your kind visit with your beautiful icon creates a magical feeling in me.Thanks for being there,always.

he he he, Papa knows me so well.I am being pampered by you, he noticed that;)

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Buzzy ,this is indeed a warm ,wonderful tribute .

Every word is a shining jewel in the crown of a gloomy face. wonderful tribute in so few words,

Thanks....hope to see you posting about how do you feel there after spending 38 days here in US.

Just trying  to relax in a hostile indian summer

Wow! This is simply amazing writing. So much said in so few words. Very powerful.

You managed to tell a poignant story in a few visual words.

The Japanese say, 'Don't be so quick to get out of the heat for you may end up in the fire.'

Yes, this wise phrase (claus) of course is English and Japanese. Just like we take foereign words into our USA English, so is English incorporated into the Japanese language. An example of a foreign word incorporated into USA English is the word basketball (the game you thrash your husband in except on Father's Day.) Basketball was first said in Canada. Originally it was basketball eh, but the US government didn't like citizens asking questions: The Japanese incorporated these words and only these English words into their dictionaries. So, you can memorize these words and proudly say 'these words' at the dinner table. When your family stares, just say it's Japanese and all will be quite Kosher.

I am smiling here,William...know your humor...This was beyond intelligent.Thank you so much.

I enjoy writing for your pleasure because you understand my humor. I just wonder if you read it wearing or not wearing shades?