by Rony J.
Member since:
February 26, 2008

My Diary

March 25, 2008 10:32 PM UTC (Updated: April 05, 2008 04:23 AM UTC)
views: 0 | 3 people recommend this | comments: 18

Unseen greatness

as I strolled in the sand

partially broken heartache

turning page after page

undeniably love has become

an odyssey.

Reminding me of a

faceless horizon, 

suddenly,  each moment

became an eternity. 

I dreamt of flying through time

on a  twilight moon surrounding us

at the mercy of a lazy breeze

destine to find  

my heart... 

I  foolishly open my heart,

allowing her to take a piece of

my soul, barely breathing.

I realize love between the lines is

Unpredictable...

Cruel....

Carefully design too allure

her deception with roses

breathing inside of me

all her essence.... 

By   Rony Joseph

RONY JOSEPH     All rights reserved

Comments: 18

Lavonne W. Mar 25, 2008, 10:43pm UTC
LOL you must mean Diary not Dairy!
Sandra C. Mar 25, 2008, 10:44pm UTC
That was a good poem.
john W. Mar 25, 2008, 10:52pm UTC
GOOD POEM RONY
*Holly *. Mar 25, 2008, 10:53pm UTC
Very good
Tina W. Mar 25, 2008, 11:04pm UTC
Great poem.
Sujata (friendly 'Suji' ) S. Mar 26, 2008, 7:52am UTC
Good read Rony !!!
Bert Van Essen Mar 26, 2008, 8:05am UTC
Life is in your poem. Real life not movie love.
David W. Mar 26, 2008, 2:04pm UTC
Nice work.
Charity B. Mar 26, 2008, 10:00pm UTC
((( Ah, yes roses...beautiful )))
Beth J. Mar 27, 2008, 10:06am UTC
Thanks for sharing
Shelbia C. Jun 11, 2009, 1:57am UTC

Wonderful poem
René Allen Apr 21, 2010, 11:54pm UTC
Rony ~ This is a poetic MASTERPIECE!

I truly enjoyed reading this poetic work of art. One of my favorites of your poetic works.

This is NOW FEATURED in Artistic Minds®.

HUGS & BLESSINGS ~
Your Friend,
René
Rony J. Apr 22, 2010, 3:45am UTC
Thank You Rene
God Bless You
René Allen Apr 28, 2010, 9:52pm UTC
You're welcome Rony. Your poetics are definitely worth the READ ALWAYS...

Blessings to you too!
Linda Syiem Apr 22, 2010, 4:51am UTC
It's an exquisite poem!
Rony J. Apr 22, 2010, 8:32am UTC
Thank You Linda
Blessings
Dee Leh Apr 25, 2010, 5:29pm UTC
Nicely written.
Rony J. Apr 26, 2010, 11:00am UTC
Thank You Dee
Blessings

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