Folks, this was entirely Kathryn's idea . She suggested we do a combined article on AUTUMN, sharing thoughts and impressions from our different perspectives.
Here it is.
She wrote the poem while I wrote the prose poem...she definitely had me inspired with her encouraging words.
The Saga of the Soft, Green Leaf


I hold this leaf, this soft green leaf, touch it to my cheek,
and I hear the Celtic flute's wail, my people's stormy steerage,
who walked the Rockies, eating wildflowers, privations of ice and death ,
which echoes the saga of the soft, green leaf;
I hold this leaf, this soft, green leaf, not yet bitten by loss of chlorophyll that brings Autumn's bright beauty, vile harbinger of death to come,
where brilliance fades to browned crimson, crumpled carcasses that blow like tumbleweeds, echoing privations of ancestors past;
I hold this leaf, this soft, green leaf, touch it to my cheek,
but I know its future holds bitter ice and death;
I yearn to know this soft green leaf will survive the crystalline ice that wraps its deathly arms around the stem, laughing, while it chokes the bud,
I yearn to see a new green bud on this very stem, its presence the ancestral smiles of sepia photos that return life in new birth, squealing, new pink birth, triumph, joy over death.
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Autumn has stepped in, tip toeing on golden star steps.
Autumn
Golden letters and half-hearted sad endings to spring's ruse....no pinks or purples now, nor the iridiscent glow of silver on winter-left lives. Here come the breaths of a dragon, perhaps. Or the sighs of a poet...or a lover's pain. Warm words flavored with hand knitted sweaters will slip September into November. Soon, it will be winter.
In Kashmir, barely-able-to-breathe-without-sending-gold-tripping-down-Chinars will soon find poets, painters, tourists, the locals and the exiled dreaming of warm fires in the home and the scent of crushed leaves. There will be fires in the sky and on the ground...letters from the Gods, soft songs caught in the trees singing, 'come again.'
Windows will soon find children with their noses pressed to the glass, writing their names and smiley faces on the condenation.
In Srinagar, boats gliding out will meet misty chills that have left streaking silver trails on the lakes. Ladies the age my grandmother was when I was ten will tie sliced turnips, tomatoes, apples and herbs into garlands to dry in sunny windows. Preparations for the winter when gray skies and moody days will walk in the door.
New Delhi will soon become a city of yellowing leaves drifting on an October air .Festivals, parties,marriages will come tripping through the letter box. Pickles and Diwali will string smiles on this busy road to winter. Lights and flavors of autumn....flights and savours of autumn....! Diyas will dance soon enough, as trunks open to reveal last year's love-affair with words, pressed and forgotten--in old journals and dry leaves.
Here in Bombay, the sea surges gray and mysterious, leaping into thought cameras. Trees don't change color here....if they do, it's rare. Only the rains come and go...
Drops the size an eye cannot measure, tiny beads and huge, thick pearls come carried on the dancing wings of winds. Rooms with open doors and windows wait for a stray golden message to float in...it may it may not..! No blankets, no crunching leaves in lone walks . No warm pockets nor fingers fiddling with nuts..none of this.
Only the rain...that walks tall, miles tall over the sea. Falling in silvery ropes that tie up flighty thoughts into sounds and words. Sounds that catch the non-autumn in songs and sighs and smiles. Sounds of a drunken rain......an autumn rain.




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Love and blessings - S.
I absolutely adore your prose poem, minnie, about autumn in Kashmir, New Delhi and Bombay. You are such a gifted writer; your poem makes me want to visit India.
I just had to find images to go with your "soft green leaf"
I found your own poem so moving...touching gentle autumn leaves and going deep into one's ancestry....and a hope for renewal of nature's glory.
You liked the images---so glad :)
Poetry anthology? :) Well....!! Thank you! To Kathryn also....for creating this idea and doing it with me...
I loved this merging of cultures. Two different worlds but with the same rich evocative
imagery. The combination of poetry and prose is fascinating.
One has to change gear a little but the Romantic mood remains.
Well done you two artists.
I simply love Minnie's poem...
as you two did it..kudos
In northern New England, however, autumn doesn't tip toe. You go to bed one evening at the end of summer and you wake in the morning to a dazzling display of color. We like to call it indian summer.
A good collaboration, fine work Kathryn and Minnie
Thanks...S
is awesome, by the way.
We took a drive on Saturday for several hours, stopping in stores and such. At one store, I stopped at a carousel of CDs you can listen to before you buy...I clicked on a Celtic CD because sometimes I really enjoy Celtic music...At once, I heard the plaintive wail and the image of my ancestors on the ship and then walking across the country eating wildflowers with many dying along the way reminded me of nature's journey for all of us - many begin but few survive...I thought of the one leaf I held in my hand and knew that even its tiny bud might not make spring...
How can I thank each person who took the time to read and leave their views here!!
A big thank you to all the readers...! Hope you all enjoy this autumn and the one falling in your gardens, back yards, lawns, cities, lakes....! It is a beautiful time of the year and it inspires so much poetry, art, music, visual arts....
Kathryn, your idea has brought so many people together, sharing the drink that is autumn, enjoying the mood it awakens in their own hearts. I had fun doing this article with you! Your soft green-brown leaves and Celtic mood really got to me!Thank you :)
Minnie, your story is wonderful.
What a collaboration!
I gave a 10 and a 10! :-)
Kathryn takes us from Ireland to the Rockies with a leaf to her cheek, Minnie opens autumn to us across India from Kashmir and New Dehli to Bombay, with beautiful photos.
...a great pleasure of this moment of the year.
Now I really want to visit India!
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I am quite late to read this as there are few pieces I won't read unless I am in my right mind ..
you two have brilliantly captured the saga of leaf , the season , changes in life as you move across miles ....
life is srinagar ..and a chinar leaf is so differnt from the life of bombay rainy days ...
and yet a leaf like us has a jouney , from a bud to death ...and leaving us with a ray of hope ..when buds will bring joy again..
M i making sense .....sorry if I am not ..M not really in my right mind yet ..:-(
who can forget that Kashmir is a heaven..
few can forget their old love affairs and Delhi is a place of wonderful events..Delhi dilwaloon ki...
and Mumbai ki barish ..kya yaad dila diya.. great....feelings..
I wanna dedicate three my fav videos to you minnie ..hope you will love it..
song on kashmir
http://youtube.com/watch?v=7wiFr1f-H1s
For Delhi
http://youtube.com/watch?v=sauMvuAtX50
For amchi Mumbai..my fav..
http://youtube.com/watch?v=7zd9b6-aPdI
Saawan Barse to aisa lagta hai , mere hi liya likha ho :)
Khush raho, aapka pyaar aur aapi dosti bahut aziz hain.
May you all dream up something unique and make it happen~
Thank you.
The second poem was more than a pleasure to read.
:)
¨Drops the size an eye cannot measure, tiny beads and huge, thick pearls come carried on the dancing wings of winds.¨
Thank you!
Soni
Light,
Sid
I just wanted to stop by since I am finally going through what is now listed as under 4,600 pieces of gather new mail that is sitting in my inbox on here.
With that mentioned I just came across either a mailing from you yourself, or someone else brought this piece to my attention. You or they felt that your creation should be shared with the gather community, which I am very glad that it was passed on to me to view. So I wanted to say Thank you for taking the time out of your busy day to publish it here on gather for us to all view. :o)
As well before I leave you I wanted to wish you a Happy New Year... in 2009 :o)