Fall Haiku

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Gorgeous Gabby, a Gather Geeky Gal, and The Giz Sep 21, 2007, 4:02pm UTC

Good one!

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Peter Joseph Swanson Sep 21, 2007, 4:05pm UTC

very nice

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John Doyle Sep 21, 2007, 4:06pm UTC

Haiku is form poetry not free verse

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Mark J. Sep 21, 2007, 4:08pm UTC

True John, but Amy is a long time Gather pal who I don't get to interact with much and I'm sure she won't mind. If she has a problem with it she'll let me know. Thanks.

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Glenn T. Sep 21, 2007, 4:17pm UTC

A nice sense of organic metamorphosis, Mark.

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Mark J. Sep 21, 2007, 4:43pm UTC

Glenn, Peter, Gorgeous Gabby...thanks for the feedback!

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penni d. Sep 21, 2007, 11:02pm UTC

kool, the wind was a'blowin'...........
thanks for the invite paul, you'all sure are a friendly bunch! I am HOOKED already...lol, did not take long,either

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Mark J. Oct 5, 2007, 9:19am UTC

Thanks WS R. & penni d.

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Jim Ross Oct 5, 2007, 1:40pm UTC

Wonderful word placement here, Mark. I was as startled as the sunlight at the ending--and enjoyed every moment of it.

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Barbary C. Oct 10, 2007, 5:19pm UTC

This haiku of multiple meaning is written with a special talent, Mark.

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Fall Haiku

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