The night my mom passed, more than a decade ago, I was not by her bedside as the rest of my siblings were. I was there that morning but early that afternoon, I had the opportunity to try and save another's life, a young girl, barely twenty. Discreetly, I whispered this to my mom and though she knew her own time on earth was coming to a close, she told me that the Lord would want me to do what i could for the girl in question as she had a full and rich life ahead of her if our journey proved successful. The journey was more successful then either the girl or myself would have ever imagined. The Lord blessed it, I know. The payment that was extracted of me was that I was not present at my mom's final farewell; seh went that very night. But she went with grace and the next day when I returned to South Carolina, my pastor who I had asked to be there with my mom in my place told me a wonderful thing. He told me that my mom had confided in him, that she could see Jesus waiting. I believe it. I believe Jesus remembered my mom and that He brought her home:
HE REMEMBERED YOU
© Robert C Burnham
You lay prone on your death bed
Decidedly ready to go
Watching the eyes of your family
Gazing on Their grieving and sorrow
You assure them that all's fine
That you have no fear to walk through
The Shepherd stands waiting
He still remembered you
Often times you've wondered
How can the Lord's grace be so right
You know you were far from perfect
Yet, always, He kept you in His sight
Serenely you lay there
In spite of your worst deeds
Your sinful desires and trespasses
As you coveted worldly needs
You speak not a word
As your family's cries come through
You simply show them a smile
Because, you know, He remembered you
Tired but unafraid you give up the ghost
Your journey home nears its end
Faithfully knowing who stood by you
Jesus Christ, Savior and Friend
You leave this old wicked world
Not sad nor not blue
But looking towards paradise
Because He remembered you






Comments: 20
(Little critique: you have a double negative in the last stanza.)
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sad but inspiring. Your mother understood you should do your tasks while her's were finished.
It was considerate of you to ask your pastor to take your place while you could not
be there. There are no coincidences. Your pastor got your blessing for you from your mother before she passed. She wanted you to know that she was seeing, not
through a glass darkly, but face to face and that if you continue to run the race before you faithfully, you will receive the same reward. How blessed is that?
Your poem reads like a beautiful hymn. It inspires everyone to believe that they will be remembered by Jesus Christ.
I do have an original hymn published here called "Mama's in Heaven". I had intended to keep that one personal but after hearing from April H, I published it to honor her recently depated mother. If you get the chance to look for it, I hope you will read it. Thanks. God Bless you All.
Simply beautiful. Very well done. Have a wonderful weekend!