I waited weeks for them, the goslings;
I waited by the willow as it wept for winter's last hurrah;
I waited by the pond's edge as ripples spread near the edge;
I waited under the footbridge, searching for a telltale Mother Goose, sitting on eggs;
I found nothing, these past few weeks, yet still I waited;
I waited through sunshine, rain, clouds, yet nothing happened.
Teens came every day to the high school, in droves, they drove their cars;
They seemed so unformed, these near-adults, about to fly the coop,
To run off to college, these teens, testing their wings.
The day after graduation, the seniors drove in a caravan in front of the high school,
Showing their mettle, honking their car horns like 10,000 noisy geese;
That was the day Mr. and Mrs. Canada Goose strut across the road;
In front of the high school, in front of 100 newly-minted high school graduates,
And Mr. and Mrs. Canada Goose brought along 6 tiny grey goslings, trying to cross the road.
The first senior stopped honking, the second senior stopped honking;
Soon, the third, fourth, fifth stopped honking their car horns,
as they waited for the goslings to cross.
Newl-minted high school graduates, fledgling adults, waiting to test their own wings, waited, As 6 tiny grey goslings and their two grown parents, crossed the road, very, very slowly.
The sun passed in front of a cloud, a shadow passed momentarily over the high school.
The sun came out again, fingers of sunlight brightened the 6 tiny grey goslings, and the
100 newly minted high school graduates.
Everyone was silent.
The 6 tiny grey goslings and their two grown parents finished crossing the road.
The 100 newly minted high-school graduates, testing their wings, cheered.
There was such a din, all this honking of car horns, the seniors proclaiming their new-found independence, that the geese joined in, honking hink honk, hink honk, hink honk, hink honk, as I drove all the way home.




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Probably because I've watched proud goose parents bringing up their young so carefully, and then observed some human parents, not so careful....
Great work!
Well done Kathryn. Lovely metaphor
Frank, that phrase just popped into my head, and as it did, I was aware it was quite alliterative, but thought it worked well. thank you so much.
I think this would make a lovely children's picture book.
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My Third Grade Class hatched out baby ducks and or geese every Spring in our classroom incubator. It was wonderful to watch how tenderly they cared for the eggs and baby ducks/geese. They charted their babies progress from the first day of incubation. After the fourth day in the incubator when their babies got their ears the children would hush the other classes that were walking by in the halls. "The noise might hurt their babies tiny ears." After the ducks or geese hatched the children took them outside to play in the field at recess. The babies bonded and imprinted to the boys and girls and would follow them every where. It was very cute.
Timch: Oh yeah, it is better than a Lemon Drop Martini.
thank you Kristin.
Thank you all, very much appreciated. it makes me very happy you have enjoyed this...
As to the "truth" of stories, it's fine that you tell us the events are conflated, but considering how many dreadful fantasies are poured out with no apology, I'm happy to enjoy the moral rhyme of this stories for a few minutes, without any "did it happen?"s.
Lyn, thank you.
It's alright, you still painted a beautiful picture for the minds eye!
Thank you for sharing!
Thank you, Philip.
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