Ghosts
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You of long ago
           upon me came calling
in the cold darkness
           of winter's night
just before
           the grey light of dawn
when the black shadows
           are deepest
and the birds have not yet
           remembered how to sing
and the moaning wind
           rattling the windows
dies to sighs
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In the stillness
           you whispered my name
a ghost voice
           from lost yesterday
breathing our memories
           across the long years
when we walked
           hand-in-hand
by a broad river
           gurgling and sparkling
under a mellow sun
           crabbing across cloudy sky
with spring showers
           and rainbow glowing
when we smiled
           into each other's eyes
and were content
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But the summer came
           with hot brass sun
to wither the grass
           suck dry the river
and the desert wind
           with searing breath
turned all to dust
           and blew
the goodness away
           till we walked apart
to the forking road
           where we went
our separate ways
           so long ago
into autumn rains
           with someone new
in the afternoon
           glowing of our days
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Now in this winter's night
           your voice
whispers my name
with faint echoes
of yesterday
           no longer sleeping
in the lost years
           and the nightmares
once more
dreams become
but my love
it is far too late
for gone are those days
and now this night
is deepest
just before the dawn
as you lay dying
but I
a ghost
for you
have long
been gone
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(With apologies - I overlooked to post this before, Passed Away )
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See also:
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000 Haunting/ Surreal - Table of Contents (for hyperlinks to more of these poems)
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Comments: 55
One question: why no punctuation (?) It's not a bad thing, I'm just curious.
i like your ending words...very final and it packs an emotional punch.
very nice, Magi, it made me slow down to catch the obvious and concealed nuances.
But I don't understand why it happens sometimes but not on other occasions. I get a little tired of trying to second guess the programme.
Oh - and btw - if you ever get the chance, even if you don't like the group, try listening to the song, 'Anthem' by Deep Purple..."When the night wind softly blows through my open window..." the spirit is so similar in places, to your creation... though not nearly as good as yours!
Will I ever publish the poems? I don't rightly know, Julian. I guess I would if a publisher was interested, but finding one seems to be a mountain too high.
I don't know the song, but will try to remember to somehow find it to listen to. And thank you also for the compliment.
Sorry I am so late getting to read this. School holidays is catch up time.
of a long lost love departed...
Someday, like Renda, I will have to have a Magi Day and go back into the Cafe and have a seat for awhile. These poems I've read over the past few days are hauntingly beautiful.
Thank you for the lovely compliment. I bow to you.
It is a beautiful tale, the kind you want to return to and linger, because it resonates within. Masterfully executed, Magi.
Thank you very much for the compliment.
I bow to you.
I am so glad I came by to by uplifted by your beautiful writing, Magi. I'll be back. Such delicately enfolded feelings and imagery portraying nostalgia, loss, deep love, remembrance of something missed and yet not at all for this love is vital and present.
Thank you for such beauty...
My very dear friend, I humbly bow to you.
Beautifully haunting.
I bow to you.